Revision:
Concept: The curiosity of lust without love.
Act 1: Tevan is a college virgin who is constantly thinking about sex. He has grown up looking at women as sex objects, and one evening he is pleasuring himself realizing the aspects of his perversion that cause his fascination. The dramatic premise is the way Tevan thinks about sex and relationships with women. The first situation that later sets the plot is: Tevan is trying to go to sleep and overhears his roommate having sexual intercourse. With his camera charging by his bed, he decides to record this happening. His roommate Lenny, was not the type of guy who wanted to record his sex. The girl, Tiffany, turns her head and realizes that Tevan is recording and starts to laugh and smirk. She then tries to show off in front of the camera. When things get heated and the sex ends, Tevan throws the blanket over his head and is excited to view the video the next day.
The inciting incident: Tevan wakes up and can’t hold back from telling his douche bag friend, Alex, about the night before. Alex grabs the camera to view the video as soon as Tevan begins to explain the situation. Tevan was going to keep the video to himself but Alex convinces him to exploit the two. Alex says “ Everybody wants to see what people at this school have sex like, and besides she liked having an audience.
The video spreads across the school, and Tevan gained a reputation for recording it. The next day he notices that his roommate was not home but he paid no attention. He had a jock and cheerleader ask him to film their intercourse. The jock says “ I want to show the people what we got!” Tevan starts an underground website that exploits the people at his school having sex.
Act 2: Tevan is in class and a normal girl, Angela, asks him if he wanted to hang out afterward. Tevan looks at it as a chance to lose his virginity. On the date, Tevan can’t keep his mind off of sex as this girl asks about his interests. This is when the first culmination happens: Tevan goes for a kiss and the girl turns her head. He says, “ I record people have sex but I can’t figure out how to have some myself”. Angela reveals that it wasn’t even what this date was about. When she figures out who Tevan really is, she is disgusted. Tevan then goes home with a bad vibe. Tevan then hears a knock on the door, it’s Tiffany and she is crying. Lenny and her had to break up because they both got kicked out of school and her father won’t even let her see Lenny.Tevan goes to sleep feeling like the gross person he is.
Act 3:
Tevan is harrased by the jock for not exploiting his video. Tevan can’t stop thinking about Angela and her mind state. When he approaches her to apologize, she looks at him like dirt. He thinks about how she wanted his company without sex. He then realizes that there was more then lust between two people. He needed love and attention but lost the chance because of him seeking lust. He is still a virgin, but his views have expanded.
Act 1: Tevan is a college virgin who is constantly thinking about sex. He has grown up looking at women as sex objects, and one evening he is pleasuring himself realizing the aspects of his perversion that cause his fascination. The dramatic premise is the way Tevan thinks about sex and relationships with women. The first situation that later sets the plot is: Tevan is trying to go to sleep and overhears his roommate having sexual intercourse. With his camera charging by his bed, he decides to record this happening. His roommate Lenny, was not the type of guy who wanted to record his sex. The girl, Tiffany, turns her head and realizes that Tevan is recording and starts to laugh and smirk. She then tries to show off in front of the camera. When things get heated and the sex ends, Tevan throws the blanket over his head and is excited to view the video the next day.
The inciting incident: Tevan wakes up and can’t hold back from telling his douche bag friend, Alex, about the night before. Alex grabs the camera to view the video as soon as Tevan begins to explain the situation. Tevan was going to keep the video to himself but Alex convinces him to exploit the two. Alex says “ Everybody wants to see what people at this school have sex like, and besides she liked having an audience.
The video spreads across the school, and Tevan gained a reputation for recording it. The next day he notices that his roommate was not home but he paid no attention. He had a jock and cheerleader ask him to film their intercourse. The jock says “ I want to show the people what we got!” Tevan starts an underground website that exploits the people at his school having sex.
Act 2: Tevan is in class and a normal girl, Angela, asks him if he wanted to hang out afterward. Tevan looks at it as a chance to lose his virginity. On the date, Tevan can’t keep his mind off of sex as this girl asks about his interests. This is when the first culmination happens: Tevan goes for a kiss and the girl turns her head. He says, “ I record people have sex but I can’t figure out how to have some myself”. Angela reveals that it wasn’t even what this date was about. When she figures out who Tevan really is, she is disgusted. Tevan then goes home with a bad vibe. Tevan then hears a knock on the door, it’s Tiffany and she is crying. Lenny and her had to break up because they both got kicked out of school and her father won’t even let her see Lenny.Tevan goes to sleep feeling like the gross person he is.
Act 3:
Tevan is harrased by the jock for not exploiting his video. Tevan can’t stop thinking about Angela and her mind state. When he approaches her to apologize, she looks at him like dirt. He thinks about how she wanted his company without sex. He then realizes that there was more then lust between two people. He needed love and attention but lost the chance because of him seeking lust. He is still a virgin, but his views have expanded.
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